Monday, August 17, 2020

The Awapuni School Fun Run

 Fun Run                     30/07/20




I sat down excitedly on the blue mat as I was looking at all the activities that had been prepared for us for the fun run. But I wasn’t very excited because I knew our turn wasn’t till 11:50. Seconds later I was playing hand games with my friends Zane , Ceejay , Archie and Rautaki because I didn’t know what else to do. We were playing a game called chopsticks. After that Ceejay and I stood up and went to cheer on Team Pukeko because my sister Quinn is in Team Pukeko and Ceejay and I wanted to watch her do the fun run. She slipped on the slip n slide , crawled under the cargo net and stepped through the mud pit.


Now it was Team Weka's turn and me and Ceejay were cheering them on as they dove into the mud pit and scrambled under the cargo net. Lot’s of other people were cheering too and there were also lot’s of laughter. As Team Weka was racing lot’s of people were playing hand games because they felt bored. I felt pretty bored so I started playing hand games too but this time instead of playing chopsticks I played battle ship’s with Archie.


When it was our turn we walked over to the blue which was our starting point and we started we sprinted through the color leaped over the tyres and looped around the maze. Then I did a manu into the mud pit then I slid on my back on the slip n slide whooo I yelled. After that Our turn was done So I got up and went and sat down on the blue mat.



We were learning about writing quality recounts about the Awapuni school fun run.

I found it easy to think of what to write because we did it the day before we started writing it.

I found it challenging to finish in time because I was sick for a couple days.

Next time I will make my story more exciting and put in more detailed words to describe my writing.    


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  2. To Rhodes
    Hi Rhodes your fun run story is amazing because it got full stops it the right place and your stemep are good.
    from Lucas N

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